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Original: 8/5/2005 2:50 AM
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Friday, August 05, 2005

 
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The Question
By Emery
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The

 

 

Boy

 

 

and

 

 

the

 

 

Bullet

 

He was the quiet kid,

The one you laughed at with your friends.

The one who took his blood and wrote,

“They’ll all be sorry in the end.”

 

He always had a pad and pen,

As he lay awake at night.

He thought of you and all you said,

And one day lost the will to fight.

 

Now with a pistol in his lap,

And a pencil in his shaking hand,

He’ll write a letter to his loving mom,

And hope she understands.

 

And on the news they’ll interview,

Inform the world on what was done.

As a crying mom can barely say,

“I can’t believe I lost my son.”

 

And on his grave they wrote the words,

“Poet, friend, and loving son.”

Forever we’ll love him.

Forever we’ll miss him.

May you never forget the boy with the gun.

 

xTwitcHx

 Posted 8/5/2005 2:50 AM - 30 Views - 36 eProps - 26 comments

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oh aaron, u have this knack for making me cry. i loved it aaron. i absolutely loved it. hmm, so i guess its my turn now... perhaps i'll get something thats half that good...well, if im lucky.

      --peanut

Posted 8/5/2005 9:01 AM by Anonymous - reply

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Hay Aaron Whats up? Well like u never comment me back y?..j/w....But yeah justc all me some time and tell me when u r going up to the park ok? Cause like i said we need to hang out ight later Love ya.......Oh i like it its awesoem by the way,,,ByE 4 NoW

~*~MONIQUE~*~

Posted 8/5/2005 11:02 AM by hollister_chick2005 - reply

I love it.  Comment back
Posted 8/5/2005 7:22 PM by Anonymous - reply

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i loved that poem

Posted 8/6/2005 12:52 AM by HoTPiNk_DUH - reply

Hey omg im loving that poem its deep and so kick ass! and ya my parent s are stuck up and I Hate them my dad has my mom brain washed and my mom  talks shit about him to me and agrees with everything i say then to his face she sucks up and goes against me and ive been grounded all summer so ya i hate them. anyways im sorry bout your parents lol! anyways ttyl!
Posted 8/6/2005 10:17 PM by Anonymous - reply

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oh man...that almost made me cry! i was like...a needle point away. i hope this is a fiction story and you didnt get inspiration from something that actually happened. cause that will just take away that needle point and id cry haha. how have you been?
Posted 8/7/2005 9:23 AM by BlueFadedMemory - reply

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haha love the layout. i see you have met some of my friends?
Posted 8/7/2005 9:24 AM by BlueFadedMemory - reply

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i loved that poem.
Posted 8/7/2005 10:09 PM by xbang_baby_bang - reply

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OMG i really like that poem its kick ass...but yeah im going to the park today....but i hope to see u up there some time.......but yeah Comment me back when u have time ok later Love ya

~*~MONIQUE~*~

Posted 8/8/2005 2:03 PM by hollister_chick2005 - reply

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Wow......just wow. You are such a talented writer.
Posted 8/9/2005 1:25 AM by LivingOnly2Die4You - reply

oh so your the aaron she talks about. .haha

hayden

Posted 8/9/2005 4:33 PM by Anonymous - reply

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Hay Aaron whats up? but hows everything been with you?? I really miss you alot...but yeah ill see u at the park sometime when ur up there>!! but comment me back aright later

~*~MONIQUE~*~

Posted 8/10/2005 1:25 AM by hollister_chick2005 - reply

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Hay it Me agian? but u need to update.......See ya

~*~MONIQUE~*~<3

Posted 8/12/2005 1:55 AM by hollister_chick2005 - reply

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Hay im sry 4 leaveing u sooo many comments....i ahven't been up at the park latly...but i Miss ya......but comment me bacl when u get online....!!

~*~MONIQUE~*~

Posted 8/12/2005 3:21 PM by hollister_chick2005 - reply

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Hay check out my new xanga thing it awesome do u like it?? but yeah I miss u lotss but comment me back ok Later

~*~MONIQUE~*~

Posted 8/13/2005 11:05 AM by MoNiQuE_ROXS2005 - reply

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that was a weeee bit on the depressing side... *tear*
as much fun as im sure you had last night, how's mike? still mad? haha
~b e c c a~
Posted 8/13/2005 1:00 PM by yarn_amuses_me - reply

incase ur wondering or didnt know or w/e...aaron's not updating bcuz his computer is in storage or something...so yea...thats why. ok..lolz

Posted 8/15/2005 9:29 AM by Anonymous - reply

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Hay Aaron whats?? I know u won't be able to update date 4 a while but I don't care ill still comment you tho....lol....but hows everything with you?? but yeah i got back from school 2day....i was ok but not that great....tho......lol....but just comment me back later

~*~MONIQUE~*~

Posted 8/15/2005 7:15 PM by hollister_chick2005 - reply

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i love emery.

i love u too.

lol.

call me sometime.

Posted 8/23/2005 5:44 PM by viva_ladave - reply

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hey i know that song! lol

tis me joey

Posted 8/28/2005 10:57 PM by Brimstone_7 - reply

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You asked why I had not left a comment for you, and I had no good answer. So here I am, leaving you a comment. You should really update again...

~Emma

Posted 9/3/2005 8:42 PM by beautyXisXfleeting - reply

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hey aaron like the poems. they are pretty sweet! well I will see you tonight you better be better at dancing tonight. j/k haha I will try to remeber to go right lol

Michelle

Posted 9/6/2005 4:05 PM by chellebell7 - reply

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super-dee-duper xanga,like the comments.

yeah i found your site, chelle told me what it was.

Steffie weffie

Posted 9/11/2005 11:05 PM by crazilykewlgal - reply

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dude whata taking so long for u to update?

Posted 9/19/2005 6:48 PM by viva_ladave - reply

hey aaron i did it, i read every single poem on ur site. and believe it or not, i only teared up twice! arent u proud of me? lol i hope ur computer's up soon so u can put that new poem up here...well, ive already heard it and thats all that matters (jk). mmk, ttyl buddy

-erica

Posted 9/24/2005 10:03 AM by Anonymous - reply

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